If you click the above, you'll see where I found this online. However, I feel compelled to say that this was created by one of my favorite teachers, Jim Simmerman.
- Begin the poem with a metaphor.
- Say something specific but utterly preposterous.
- Use at least one image for each of the five senses, either in succession or scattered randomly throughout the poem.
- Use one example of synesthesia (mixing the senses).
- Use the proper name of a person and the proper name of a place.
- Contradict something you said earlier in the poem.
- Change direction or digress from the last thing you said.
- Use a word (slang?) you’ve never seen in a poem.
- Use an example of false cause-effect logic
- Use a piece of “talk” you’ve actually heard (preferably in dialect and/or which you don’t understand).
- Create a metaphor using the following construction: ‘The (adjective) (concrete noun) of (abstract noun)…”
- Use an image in such a way as to reverse its usual associative qualities.
- Make the persona or character in the poem do something he/she could not do in “real life.”
- Refer to yourself by nickname and in the third person.
- Write in the future tense, such that part of the poem seems to be a prediction.
- Modify a noun with an unlikely adjective
- Make a declarative assertion that sounds convincing but that finally makes no sense.
- Use a phrase from a language other than English.
- Make a nonhuman object say or do something human (personification).
- Close the poem with a vivid image that makes no statement, but that “echoes” an image from earlier in the poem.
Here is an example poem, written by Jim Simmerman:
Quote
Moon Go Away I Don’t Love You No More
- Morning comes on like a wink in the dark.
- It’s me it’s winking at.
- Mock light lolls in the boughs of the pines. Dead air numbs my hands. A bluejay jabbers like nobody’s business. Woodsmoke comes spelunking my nostrils. and tastes like burned toast where it rests on my tongue.
- Morning tastes the way a rock felt kissing me one the eye:
- a kiss thrown by Randy Shellhourse on the Jacksonville, Arkansas, Little League field because we were that bored in 1965.
- We weren’t that bored in 1965
- Dogs ran amuck in the years of the poor, and music spilled out of every window though none of us could dance.
- None of us could do the Frug, the Dirty Dog
- because we were small and wore small hats.
- Moon go away, I don’t love you no more was the only song we knew by heart.
- The dull crayons of sex and meanness scribbled all over our thoughts.
- We were about as happy as headstones.
- We fell through the sidewalk and changed color at night.
- Little Darry was there to scuff through it all,
- so that today, tomorrow, the day after that he will walk backward among the orphaned trees
- and toy rocks that lead him nowhere I could ever track, till he’s so far away, so lost
- I’ll have to forget him to know where he’s gone.
- La grave poullet du soir est toujours avec moi-
- even as the sky opens for business; even as shadows kick off their shoes;
- even as this torrent of clean morning light comes flooding down and over it all.
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